What a lovely enticing story! That art just pulled me in, at the very beginning, it's so colourful, sexy and full of details to admire! And I loved the concept! What better way to get intimate with someone than sharing their dreams - well, in their case, more like nightmares, but talk about intimate in this case, so much more so! I loved it how their essence was music (I can totally tie Jethro Tull into Tony's character!) - and rock music with metal elements at that, ha! I don't know too much about the character, but Tony Stark sounds like a badass member of my generation! I really liked it how you built up their relationship from annoyance, through confusion and mistrust, to eventual admiration, realisation how much they had in common and, in the end, intimacy - they were practically living inside each other's mind, how could they not? I loved how you described Loki (OMG; he's like my perfect man, long hair, green eyes, yum!) and there are such great story-telling details in this story, such as describing Loki's shifty, adaptable perspective of the world with morphing silver-grey colours - very poetic and demonstrative at the same time. It was very nicely portrayed how Loki felt validated through this one man that cautiously admired him, and how it made Tony feel that he found someone that understood what it meant to grow from an under-appreciated child to a self-made man, well, demigod. :) I admit the horse-riding adventure made me giggle, because I was immediately swamped by the memories of my own awkward experiences, but it lead to a lovely, hot sex scene in the end, so you won't hear me complain! I think the most satisfying thing for me was the end, how their essences couldn't be torn apart - and they didn't much care or worry anymore because they've found the one kindred spirit in each other. I was utterly impressed with how much background knowledge of the both universes you put into this story, and dammit I wish I knew more about them as well, so I could give you a more competent, and better formulated comment. Lovely story, gorgeous characterisation, flawless writing. Very impressively done, Nia dearest, I know why I missed your writing! :)
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Date: 2016-11-12 09:44 pm (UTC)I loved it how their essence was music (I can totally tie Jethro Tull into Tony's character!) - and rock music with metal elements at that, ha! I don't know too much about the character, but Tony Stark sounds like a badass member of my generation! I really liked it how you built up their relationship from annoyance, through confusion and mistrust, to eventual admiration, realisation how much they had in common and, in the end, intimacy - they were practically living inside each other's mind, how could they not? I loved how you described Loki (OMG; he's like my perfect man, long hair, green eyes, yum!) and there are such great story-telling details in this story, such as describing Loki's shifty, adaptable perspective of the world with morphing silver-grey colours - very poetic and demonstrative at the same time. It was very nicely portrayed how Loki felt validated through this one man that cautiously admired him, and how it made Tony feel that he found someone that understood what it meant to grow from an under-appreciated child to a self-made man, well, demigod. :)
I admit the horse-riding adventure made me giggle, because I was immediately swamped by the memories of my own awkward experiences, but it lead to a lovely, hot sex scene in the end, so you won't hear me complain! I think the most satisfying thing for me was the end, how their essences couldn't be torn apart - and they didn't much care or worry anymore because they've found the one kindred spirit in each other. I was utterly impressed with how much background knowledge of the both universes you put into this story, and dammit I wish I knew more about them as well, so I could give you a more competent, and better formulated comment. Lovely story, gorgeous characterisation, flawless writing. Very impressively done, Nia dearest, I know why I missed your writing! :)