I love those 'perfect moments'! I wish I could experience them much more often!
I hate it when I struggle with a fic. I started one once that was such a good idea and it just never went anywhere because it fought me every step of the way. I still think it would be cool, but something will have to change if I ever expect to make it work. I think the problem is with the POV, but the whole thing was the unique pov. If that has to change then I am not going to finish it because it won't be what I wanted to do. So those things aren't unusual. I suppose forcing it would just ruin it too. Good luck with it! Maybe try it from a slightly different approach?
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I hate it when I struggle with a fic. I started one once that was such a good idea and it just never went anywhere because it fought me every step of the way. I still think it would be cool, but something will have to change if I ever expect to make it work. I think the problem is with the POV, but the whole thing was the unique pov. If that has to change then I am not going to finish it because it won't be what I wanted to do. So those things aren't unusual. I suppose forcing it would just ruin it too. Good luck with it! Maybe try it from a slightly different approach?